For our first piece of writing we had describe a game of hide and seek.
WALT: visualise and write about an experience.
Think about playing a game of hide and seek/spotlight.
Take yourself back to that moment of time playing the game.
Picture in your head playing the game
Tell us about…
Where are you hiding?
What is the first thought that pops into your head?
What is the first sound you hear?
Who are you hiding from?
What can you see?
Write down everything you can recall.
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Talofa Lava , these piece of writing are fabulous. Its very creative and has a lot of descriptive sentences. Nice work :)
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Malo e Lelei, This is very impressive and creative. Marvelous create work. Good Work.
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Maria ;)